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Nothing is clear,
The world's just so cold.
It's so crowded in here,
But I feel so alone.

Forgotten and lost,
Im falling so fast.
Life happens around me,
But I stay in the past.

Beautiful memories
Fill up my mind.
But I want to forget,
Want to leave you behind.

How can a heart
That's broken keep beating?
How do you live a life
Not worth living?

I'm wanting to feel,
but I need to forget
What I thought was real
But the pain's not gone yet...
©2008-2009 ~Phobic42
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((...i think that's the right category.... -shrug))

...this is lame but whatever... just thought i'd post it...
the ending stinks... :P oh well.


and that's all.
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=itismestwin:iconitismestwin: Jul 5, 2008, 9:39:23 AM
Nice I like it. Very.. uh.. sad I think..

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~Phobic42:iconPhobic42: Jul 5, 2008, 3:11:02 PM
thanks... yeah

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~mUsIcFrEaK92:iconmUsIcFrEaK92: Jul 5, 2008, 10:36:02 PM
I can relate to this one.
=itismestwin:iconitismestwin: Jul 5, 2008, 10:41:54 PM
lol you're welcome.

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~demonic-colector:icondemonic-colector: Jul 6, 2008, 7:21:21 AM
verry nice love it and it fits me compleetly

u do awsome stuff

keep up the good work

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If the guy I dreamed of doesn't exist, i'll never die of a broken heart....
~Phobic42:iconPhobic42: Jul 6, 2008, 7:24:55 AM
:D thanks so much!!! :hug:

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- The Pineapple Addict

Laugh more, gripe less
Ignore critics, say yes
Order dessert, endure strife
Stay together, love life.

:typerhappy:
~Phobic42:iconPhobic42: Jul 6, 2008, 7:25:19 AM
yeah... me too... :)
thanks for the fav!!

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- The Pineapple Addict

Laugh more, gripe less
Ignore critics, say yes
Order dessert, endure strife
Stay together, love life.

:typerhappy:
~demonic-colector:icondemonic-colector: Jul 6, 2008, 7:30:35 AM
thanks :glomp: :glomp::glomp::glomp::glomp::glomp::glomp::glomp::glomp::glomp::glomp: its a full bolwn atack ah here comes the infantry

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If the guy I dreamed of doesn't exist, i'll never die of a broken heart....
~shy-fox:iconshy-fox: Jul 7, 2008, 4:27:56 AM
It's so crowded in here,
But I feel so alone.

know that feeling very well..

I think u did a great job on this poem :)

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cuteness rulezz ^^
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